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Sep 6, 2022Liked by machi

I listened the VO on my way to work and I found it very compelling. It's interesting to hear both narration and scene mechanical breakdown. For me, it is easier to consume this as a spoken thing, but I like that it's also written out. I'll do a deeper dive when I have the free time to read the text.

The one critique I have is surrounding the explanation of why your Druid has the "supposed to be for Rangers" Beast Bond. I know it's a hand wave of the established rules, but I think an explanation of "it was cool so I let the character have it to create compelling story" (which I believe is your actual reason) would have been better than the "what are you going to do" you presented. Please don't take this one tiny nitpick as my impression of the overall story and game. I found it very compelling and evocative. And I am definitely looking forward to more.

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My dude I am impressed

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Keep it up!!!

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